Thursday, July 26, 2007

velvet rapture

against skin
surge, electrifying - i,
a vessel, felt him
inside me
throbbing, engorged
he filled my cavern
with his sweet, milky essence
holding my breath --
waiting to exhale
... rapture ...
folded into
slow, softly dancing
and infinitesmal
beadlets of sweat
panting. breathless. silent -
two glowing orbs
of glistening pulp
from the barbs
of delicate carmine kisses

~written by


Enemy of the Republic said...

Wow. Good stuff. RM--I love you. Damn girl, you can write!

Alok said...

gr8 stuff ... fills one with desires

alok said...

susan ~ didja think i had THAT in me? i look at this and i, myself, am impressed.

alok ~ thanx ... then, it has the "desired" effect ... ;^)

Alok said...

ha ha red.... it had the "desired effect for sure

Bardouble29 said...

Love this poem...makes me want to go get entangled with my man!!

Sandy said...

sand against
surge electrifying - i
a beauty, felt water
lashing against
sweetly, mermerising
gently filling cave nearby
with all the salty blue water
holding everybodys breath
waiting to recede back
and come again
The blue ocean against
beautiful sand. said...

bardouble ~ ;^)

sandy ~ interesting ... :)

The Lone Beader said...

That's HOT!

eric313 said...

Sweet moments of pleasure; a lifetime of memories.

Love and lust will always be with us, inspiring and enticing us to connect on every level on which we can possibly do so. said...

eric ~ indeed.

Bardouble29 said...

I read your poem to a "friend" and he loved it. said...

hey, barb ~ that's cool. thx.