skin
against skin
surge, electrifying - i,
a vessel, felt him
inside me
throbbing, engorged
he filled my cavern
with his sweet, milky essence
holding my breath --
waiting to exhale
... rapture ...
folded into
slow, softly dancing
and infinitesmal
beadlets of sweat
panting. breathless. silent -
two glowing orbs
of glistening pulp
dangling,
from the barbs
of delicate carmine kisses
~written by the.red.mantissa~
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Wow. Good stuff. RM--I love you. Damn girl, you can write!
gr8 stuff ... fills one with desires
alok
susan ~ didja think i had THAT in me? i look at this and i, myself, am impressed.
alok ~ thanx ... then, it has the "desired" effect ... ;^)
ha ha red.... it had the "desired effect for sure
Love this poem...makes me want to go get entangled with my man!!
sand against
sand
surge electrifying - i
a beauty, felt water
lashing against
sweetly, mermerising
gently filling cave nearby
with all the salty blue water
holding everybodys breath
waiting to recede back
and come again
The blue ocean against
beautiful sand.
bardouble ~ ;^)
sandy ~ interesting ... :)
That's HOT!
Sweet moments of pleasure; a lifetime of memories.
Love and lust will always be with us, inspiring and enticing us to connect on every level on which we can possibly do so.
eric ~ indeed.
I read your poem to a "friend" and he loved it.
hey, barb ~ that's cool. thx.
:)
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