Broken heart
Bleeding skin
Everywhere I turn
I only sin.
You don't want to love me
And I understand
But all that I want
Is for everything to end.
Empty words
Lonely soul
Are you happy now
That I'm alone?
Leave me now
To my death
Remember one day I said your name
With my dying breath.
BARB
Bardouble29 (aka Barb) has always loved to write. Writing has proven to be a way to deal with the tough parts of life. Her poetry tends to be a little on the dark and sad side. She loves making words come alive. But she can be known to throw in poems of other venue.
7 comments:
Well that's deep.
WOW!!
very nice choice of words.
Really good stuff . Nice blog!
definitely groovy
Broken heart
Bleeding skin
Everywhere I turn
I only sin.
i like that.
nice.
The last line made my hair stand on end.
Your rhthym is perfect, and the idea and story within make it work so well.
And the last line is electrifyng, for sure.
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