I asked, you denied,
I asked again, you began to see.
You wanted to hold on tighter.
To try to be what you can not.
Don't hold me back.
I need to spread my wings.
You unlocked the cage,
I tentively stepped out.
"If you love something,
set it free...."
Don't hold your breathe,
I am not coming back.
Please understand...
Know where my heart lies.
Written by Bardouble29
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"know where my heart lies."
What a great line. Even if love flies away and is lost and gone forever, we can still know that it's where it belongs. And be glad for that.
Be free, Barb. Take care.
What a beautiful poem!
so poignant...and beautiful!am glad i passed by here
Sad but beautiful...
Beautiful poem. But these two lines make me think
"If you love something,
set it free...."
I can leave something that i love. i would very much want it to be by me every time. and if i love someone that much then that person would not be in a state where he feels himself caged, he will always feel free.
Lovely poem though
well it looks like a poets blog. i dont understand too much of poetry.
I get this.
Love the poem . First time visitor. Your poetry has inspired me.
And it still rings true--I hope you are free, free of the struggle, of the demons, of everything that held you prisoner.
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good work, beatiful and deep. what able check out a few of mine.
wow very nicely written
I like the line "know where my heart lies."
It is really heart touching.
How can i get more about this?
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