tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4498081651782369433.post8046696184934657437..comments2023-05-09T07:26:30.106-07:00Comments on A Poets Corner: Wishing WellBardouble29http://www.blogger.com/profile/02792662853238196699noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4498081651782369433.post-47621465378488148392007-08-16T21:49:00.000-07:002007-08-16T21:49:00.000-07:00Everyone~Thank you for reading this one. It does ...Everyone~<BR/><BR/>Thank you for reading this one. It does mean a lot. The metaphor was born of simplicity--I was just going to wish Barb well for the night, and in writing the first sentence I noticed it was coming out as a poem and the metaphor would be perfect (accidents and serendipity produce the best metaphors), so I went with it. Creation is a very spontaneous thing like that, at least for me it is.<BR/><BR/>Thank you all for your reading of this one. You are great, and it's nice to kick back and read as you all are flowering into a poetic renaissance, as well.eric1313https://www.blogger.com/profile/13807078704660045859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4498081651782369433.post-75411665417116619742007-08-01T12:39:00.000-07:002007-08-01T12:39:00.000-07:00Wow, Eric--what a metaphor! Is it me or does your ...Wow, Eric--what a metaphor! Is it me or does your poetry just get richer per output!Enemy of the Republichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17342253341470198835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4498081651782369433.post-89383130696759999902007-08-01T09:15:00.000-07:002007-08-01T09:15:00.000-07:00Wow its almost like a beautiful story expressed in...Wow its almost like a beautiful story expressed in poetic flow. The various personification that u have used for sunrise is beautiful.Sandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05460916036979646112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4498081651782369433.post-37476083787728862772007-08-01T07:30:00.000-07:002007-08-01T07:30:00.000-07:00"The floors are on fire--we are drunken well-wishe..."The floors are on fire--<BR/>we are drunken well-wishers<BR/>casting pennies into darkness"<BR/><BR/><BR/>love the visual imagery of this one ... and the way you've juxtaposed the notion of the wishing well with fiery imagery.<BR/><BR/>i can see those clouds ... "bloodroses ..." love that!the.red.mantissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01648363657298594034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4498081651782369433.post-67794797919469037712007-08-01T06:32:00.000-07:002007-08-01T06:32:00.000-07:00I like this. Once again with the extreme visuals!...I like this. Once again with the extreme visuals! I just keep picturing a landscape awash in golden fiery red orange glow.Lola Starrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389474503579493129noreply@blogger.com